<![CDATA[Discovery Gaming Community - RP Stories Feedback Forum]]> https://discoverygc.com/forums/ 2024-09-18T15:09:04Z MyBB Helix]]> 2024-09-15T03:33:32Z 2024-09-15T03:34:30Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=204693 <![CDATA[Horizons Log/Story Feedback Thread]]>
My new RP project, Horizons LTD./Bring me that Horizon.../Horizon Seeker has kicked off. I'm a bit ahead of the game with some logs already typed up following the adventures of the crew. This post is for those who interact with the crew of the Horizon Seeker in game as well as the forum post located here. All forms of feedback are welcomed provided it is respectful and constructive.

I have always enjoyed exploration RP as well as the Luxury Yacht so I figured I would combine the two to create a new, and hopefully unique, story driven adventure which is guided by those we meet in space. Also, there will be some regular story elements in the post aside from standard logs. Disagreements with the crew based upon their colorful histories is certainly something I would like to explore as time goes on. Many more options are on the table as I go through the story with these characters that I have created.

Thank you for your time, I hope everyone enjoys the logs, story, and interactions as much as I will.
]]> false Eternal.Journey]]> 2024-09-07T23:15:50Z 2024-09-08T17:15:32Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=204130 <![CDATA[Hope’s Feedback Thread]]>
”If you hesitate, don’t do it. If you’re doing it, never hesitate.”

That was something a friend told me some time ago. A lifetime of hesitation has taught me little, so its about time I stop. A feedback thread for me, my roleplays, my impact on the community, anything about me that you think I should know, be it good or bad. Here, your opinions are welcome in all shapes and sizes (yes, even yours Darius). Its about time that I heard the community’s opinion of the things I do and have done in the past. Below is a list of my roleplay characters, some of you will likely know these characters or have interacted with them sometime within the last few months. There is also a separation between more “serious” characters and my “funny fly around and just spout stuff around the sector” characters.

My more serious, better known characters in roleplays (some links attached, for completeness sake):

Eternal.Journey - Jack Kynaston. Captain’s Log, kinda a Monologue of events; Communications between “Crowley” and Jack;

K’Hara|Vaer’Lif - A Nomad “Nymph”. Lightsong between Ki’Shar and Vaer’Lif;

RPA|Saoirse.Keane (among others) - Molly lass. No current threads, subject to possibly change in the future.

K’Hara|Surn’Fei-Da,Vir - ’Mature’ Warform. Meeting between Sh’ozak, Einbeck and Surn’Fei; Lightsong between the Einbeck and Surn’Fei; Attempt at Growing a new form; Guarding presence of the retreating Wild forces from Thuringia;

Emily Gataki - Starlight Research Consortium recent recruit. Involvement within the recovery of the Dreamscape;

Wilde.Jormungandr - Wild Logistics manager Frederick Schmidt (Heuschrecke). Communication between “Thraike” (Cortana Clarke) and “Shar’Jalvir” (‘Heuchrecke’);

Less serious characters, less developed, but can be alotta fun:

BIS-Cuit - Intel agent under review/development, no current posts, recently just for “fun”

Wild-Ryde - deranged, weak-minded individual. No incubi, but definitely influenceable by Nomads with little effort. Tries to give away propaganda to everyone except the MND, as they would recognise its stolen from their agents. Also has “friends” aboard from time to time.

The .Bucket collection - Buncha nervous chattering, eyes-wide-in-wonderment kinda people. Primarily Hegemons. (Not all the Buckets are mine, but a fair few are.)

Malicious.Intents - not a people person. Will fight for any side if they pay well enough.

A Character list and a couple links (where appropriate) is enough. I would write a short info page for each character, but that’d turn out more like a long novel of a forum post, and thats less in line with what this is for. There’s likely characters or names I’ve missed off, likely due to my poor memory (I have asked the Nomads for more Cloud space. No response as of yet…), so expect updates to this list as time moves forward. Granted, theres not been much recent forum activity currently on the threads (at the time of Original Posting), though that is partly due to my own reluctance to spend my time here in favour of being in game. I am hoping this is going to motivate me to be a little more proactive instead of just procrastinating.

Anyone who doesn’t feel like posting here, but does want to share their opinions, Discord is the best way to reach me ().
]]> false Civil Servant]]> 2024-08-17T23:33:30Z 2024-08-17T23:34:53Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=204389 <![CDATA[Civil Servant || RP Queries & Feedback thread]]> Civil Servant feedback)


Yes, this is probably long overdue and yes this is an account for a single character that I play religiously (no pun intended). This is due to reasons of personal interests and preferred playstyles, but the fact that its always interesting to see how deep one can go on watchlists with other characters with personal interactions. Discovery Freelancer also seemed like a place to me that had a rarity of ethically-good characters and I was interested in seeing how far someone could go in attempt to fix or make up for ones potentially unforgivable actions and enduring the challenges it brings.

I very much look forward to anyone who enjoys at least a little conversation in space, I'm not usually one to chase up PvP engagements but sometimes they even surprise me! So regardless of how passionate one is on the opposite side of the table to myself, a long chat and discussion is always enjoyed by myself if one can spare the time.

As it currently stands, I am the leader of the Platform (Not that I really asked for it, thanks ), although my job is mostly to delegate actions and keep an eye out for matters concerning the Platform and its members such as forum and ingame activity. and to pick up on RP that might be needed for the faction. Although faction direction and planning is always discussed with other members as we try to encourage everyone involvement. (Very much expected for a faction with no ranks).

To those waiting on communications or activity from me, I apologize that my usual time play Discovery Freelancer is around the weekend but we all know the rules. IRL &t Disco (But also not to make too many promises you can't keep.) But do give me a poke here if needed if the delay seems extensive.

So please feel free comment on interactions that you've had, any questions that you might have on the characters history (Although I encourage to try and obtain that in game) or just general feedback to what you've seen.

Some resources to the character's background:

■ CS Personal Logs (The first page is an index that can be used to jump to story posts)
■ CS faction file
]]> false EisenSeele]]> 2024-06-21T04:05:07Z 2024-09-11T10:24:49Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=203672 <![CDATA[Kai Siegfried Cinematic Universe Feedback]]> Characters
[+]Kai Siegfried, Director, BDM
[+]Diogenes Monday
[+]Ernst Riemann, Platform
[+]Guy Pasteur, GNI
[+]Edmund Priestley, CMDR, BAF
[+]Roberto, the Dread Poet, DTR
[+]Eugene Browning, Aegis
Other stuff:
[+]One Offs and Random Crap
[+]CNS Articles:

WORK IN PROGRESS

I'm always down to collaborate for a cool story, hit me up and we can figure something out! With regards to any and all undercover characters now and going forward, any transfer of potentially damage information between the people I work with in collaboration to the BDM will be with as much OORP mutual agreement as possible. Naturally, if my undercover finds a plot to bomb a Rheinland city, he'll obviously pass that along - but for more minor things like shooting a few non BDM civilians/military, or some minor plots, I'll ask first.

My discord is: flammenwerfer_81942]]> false Big Bison Bessie]]> 2024-06-15T12:52:26Z 2024-06-15T13:05:19Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=203550 <![CDATA[Bessie Bishop feedback thread]]> In the briefest possible description possible, Bessie Bishop is a former Liberty Rogue turned BHG pilot.

I may write and post an official bio at some point in the future, but I am more interested in writing episodic adventures for her.

I will provide a link to her story thread here:
https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthrea...id=2336306

I plan on writing and posting new episodes every so often. Originally I wanted to have multiple episodes ready to post at once, but I decided to just wrap up one entry and make it really solid and post it and take care of a few other side projects before writing more. I will post here in this thread whenever I post a new entry for her.

Let me know if you guys have any questions, comments, or feedback for the character I play in the game or the writing I do for her.

I may throw some art for her in here that I have done up as well, which I will just add into this section below here

[Image: OtTezjd.png]

[Image: XkK95Jc.png]

And if you read my writing, thank you very much.]]> false Nodoka Hanamura]]> 2024-04-19T19:53:15Z 2024-08-11T08:43:47Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=202712 <![CDATA[Nodoka Hanamura - Feedback Thread]]>
[+]Mieko's Character Information
[+]Old Post
This thread now serves as the general feedback thread for all of my roleplays, across all characters. I will collect and catalog all RPs, both from the 825 era, and the 'Deuxieme Reunion' era as time and interest allows. In the mean time, if you have questions that aren't strictly feedback related, please forward them to me directly rather than into this feedback thread.

I am aware there are discrepancies in some things, some of which are intentional retcons, and others are me just forgetting things. If you find something that isn't likely a retcon, please let me know - chances are if it was made recently, and wasn't based on something from back in 2018, it was just me not remembering something properly. I've done that lately with the mistakes around Ootori-419.

Diary:
Mieko's Diary - Contains old Logs.

Roleplays:
[SEMI-PUBLIC RP] Flowers Of The Forest

Communications:
Communiques that have not been responded to will not be listed.

TO: FIRMITAS | FROM: MIEKO IEKAHARA | SUBJ: HELLO
TO: LAZURITH | FROM: MIEKO IEKAHARA | SUBJ: LEVIATHAN
to: Mieko Iekahara (from Emilia Freud)]]> false CO. Slate]]> 2024-04-05T07:35:08Z 2024-04-08T02:39:24Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=202511 <![CDATA[DOWOP/Apparatus Feedback]]>
How did I do? What could I improve?

The cell of LSF agents in question
Dept. of War Operations Planning
[+]Forum RP Posts Elsewhere
]]> false Fab]]> 2023-12-14T02:48:19Z 2024-04-24T14:00:18Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=201128 <![CDATA[Teide / Reasoner feedback]]> Main thread

Other associated RP threads, sorted by oldest:
Communication to Hogosha
Communication to MRI
Communication to Starfliers
Communication to Revenant/Auxo

"Teide" is a SRP project of mine which uses an experimental approach to updates and storytelling. suggestions, constructive criticism, opinions, or praise is welcome.

This thread will also keep track of RP in general.]]> false Fiorella de Marco]]> 2023-11-29T20:51:00Z 2023-11-29T20:51:00Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=200845 <![CDATA[Character Feedback Thread - Fiorella A. de Marco]]>
CHARACTER'S FEEDBACK THREAD
It seems it took me quite a long time to notice the special section for feedback about characters. Now it should be correct.

This thread is here for you if you want to share your impressions or experiences of interacting with my character in a more official way than through private in-game messages or Discord.

Disclaimer - I will not be disclosing my character's inner motivations and thoughts about certain matters as I keep those hidden through interactions on purpose.

]]> false Mellony's Acquisitions]]> 2023-11-03T05:40:36Z 2023-11-12T23:54:56Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=200180 <![CDATA[Mel's Misadventures & Beaumont Chronicles: Feedback, Questions & Updates]]>
I will be editing this primary post in this thread with information, characters, and such as I go along. Please feel free to ask any questions or offer feedback on the story here!

Sorry that the opening chapter is a bit grim. I still hope it's good though!

-Mel

&tUpdate Nov. 9, 2023&t

Characters now have their own thread with biographies here.]]> false Automata]]> 2023-10-31T11:11:51Z 2023-10-31T11:11:51Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=200100 <![CDATA[776-28X: Feedback Thread]]>


776-28X FEEDBACK THREAD

This thread is for anyone who wishes to express their views, either positive or negative, regarding how I play my AI in the service of humanity and the Colonies, 776-28X. Originally, I was hesitant to play an AI here due to the stigma associated with Gammu AI. However, as the Core managed to occupy the their planet and start plundering any technologies they could find, it gave me a good excuse to play a human-made AI as faithfully as possible to the lore.


]]> false |Scarecrow|]]> 2023-10-30T02:28:14Z 2023-10-30T02:32:56Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=200063 <![CDATA[The 'Scarecrow' Saga, Discussion]]>
This thread is for any general discussion around the stories of Scarecrow, the Freedom Fighters, Robert Merlow, Sayne Jadyn, and the many other protagonists from way back when... I have plans to write some new bits, but largely it’s all reflective on old material, and links directly to my ‘Saga Overviews’ thread under the stories tab; an overview of past stories, and any other stories that involve my old character ‘Scarecrow’. At the time of writing this, I am imminently about to complete ‘The Scarman Enigma’ (finally, after lots of life getting in the way). That story was originally completed years ago, but the ending was lost in the transference from the Shattered Worlds forums to Discovery, so I felt compelled to rewrite it. I hope you enjoyed it! I’d love to hear your impressions!

I plan to steadily post a list of overviews / blurbs on the ‘saga’ thread on the stories board, that make up a fairly epic string of tales, all of which were told back in the hayday of Freelancer modding and RP. All these stories existed in long form prose at some point during the height of the modding communities; that is to say from approximately 2003 to 2008. I was a key writer in almost all of them. Some were the familiar cooperative play-by-post style of roleplay, whilst others I wrote in full as prose form. Sadly, I no longer have copies of most of them, but I do have this old overview document that linked all the stories together and placed them into a chronological order. Those that do exist are up on this forum (I’ll link to them when their entry comes around). I absolutely do not have the time to rewrite them all, so this series of synopsis will have to do. I’m treating this as an archive, of sorts, for all the work I did back then.

I’ve decided to call the series, ‘The Scarecrow Saga’, as all the stories here were predominantly orchestrated by me, and largely followed my main character Marcus “Scarecrow” Scarman. No disrespect to any of my old buddies, but when trying to think of a name, it seemed the most obvious and fitting (and these stories in particular are strung together by my own writing and experience). As I’ve mentioned, many other Freelancer players were involved along the way, and you’ll see I have credited them where I can remember their contributions. I do not know many of their real names, but I have recalled their Freelancer handles and IDs to the best of my memory.

By today’s standards, most of the stories listed here were awful. Well… I like to think they were compelling, but they were badly written, at least from my side of things. Those written by me from back in the day contained a terrible amount of intellectual property plagiarism and poor imitations of authors I had read at the time. Authors like Ben Bova, Dan Abnett, and Neil Ascher… some of whom I’d rather forget. Marcus Scarman was once a villain in a classic 1970s episode of Doctor Who! Look him up, it’s hilarious! I’ve no idea why I settled on thieving that name, of any of the ones I’d read or seen. Nothing like the Liberty action hero I’d dreamed of playing…

But despite this, I hold these stories very dear. I imitated those writers and stole their characters and styles because I was captivated by them. That captivation led me to write… and write… and write. I wrote terrible prose for years, to a reasonable amount of support and respect from my online peers, it must be said. I was in college at the time, and this brought some things into focus for me. It made me realise that I was creative – I started to excel in things like creative writing, graphic design, and filmmaking – For a kid who was average at almost everything else, this was a big deal. And it also made me realise that I wanted to do something creative for a living. Because of my amateur fanfic Freelancer stories, I decided to do a degree in filmmaking, with a specialism in screenwriting. I then did a masters’ degree in documentary, and now I’m a documentary filmmaker of almost thirteen years, working in places around the world I never thought I’d go, and telling stories about incredible things I’d never heard of as a teenager. I suppose I'm trying to say that this stuff can be important. IS important. If you want to do something with it, then chase it! Set goals, and always strive to better your practice. I still have ambitions to be a writer of (actual) pulp science fiction, and I have a graphic novel project in the works.

I feel I should also strongly indicate that I no longer plagiarise Dan Abnett. These days, my writings are fully my own.

So, thanks, mid-noughties Freelancer communities! I owe you all a lot! Here’s to pulp science fiction!

I hope you enjoy,

Best,

Chris
|Scarecrow|]]> false Llama]]> 2023-09-28T10:12:01Z 2023-09-28T23:46:53Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=198831 <![CDATA[Feedback: The Sentience Paradox, The Omicron Gambit]]> Thankyou for reading or listening.

Donations/Tips to: Llama's.Exports

Sentience's in-game name: Sentience

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I will continue Sentience's story as time goes on.
As you may have guessed, It's a quasi-hostile (has a hatred for a few factions mentioned) A.I who now assumes its role is to destroy desolate/ forgotten player bases/technology.
A warning to those not to neglect them and to keep an eye on the base attack thread.

Please post your feedback/comments/questions or compliments here - play nice!
(and no - its not my voice. It's A.I generated)]]> false Serpentis]]> 2023-09-26T15:06:10Z 2024-04-19T01:38:21Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=198799 <![CDATA[Serpentis feedback thread]]>

Lost to the Wind
A story tied to one of my oldest characters on the mod, an old SCRA character.

Here comes a list of characters and their appearances, they also show up the first time a character (that matters) is named (or near), the links are blue and bolden names, should be easy to see, but here is the list.


All of the OLD (ancient) stories are unimportant right now, I can link some if you want, but, they're honestly just too old.]]> false Demonic]]> 2023-09-19T14:37:20Z 2023-10-30T07:49:40Z https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthread.php?tid=198711 <![CDATA[Demonic - character list and feedback thread]]> Characters
Name Occupation Forum / in game Ship used Ship type
Finnean MacRory Coordinator of the Irregulars Both [&tMRI&t]Ol'Reliable Serenity
[&tMRI&t]Highlander Draugr
Lachlan MacRory Coordinator of the Irregulars Forum
Kurt Wagner Member of the Irregulars In game [&tMRI&t]Conerock Peregrine
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Calamity Kate Scrapper of Lone Star Scrappers Both &tLSS&tUnsafe.Distance Junker CSF
&tLSS&tZero.Caution Border Worlds Train
&tLSS&tForceful.Recycler Salvager
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